From My Attic Vii Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

From My Attic Vii

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There are words in my head
in my limbs and my ears
there are some for the dead
and for those who can hear.
There's a flood simply waiting
to enlighten the masses
and the bold ones are mating
with the word middle classes.
I am swimming with sparks
and it matters a lot
as each letter leaves marks
and the airwaves run hot.
I pretend that I couldn't
really care what they say
but I know that I wouldn't
want to chase them away.
All you people please listen
to the words that want out
as the syllables glisten
and the consonants pout.
If you like the sensation
of a mellow bouquet
come and read my creation
and consider a stay
As a bird of one feather
I do welcome you, yes.
As together we weather
the critique from the press.

Thursday, October 12, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: flood,swimming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 14 October 2006

Love your glistening syllables and pouting consonants. Very creative penning here, good Sir. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Listening of course... how could one not, to an utterly brilliant series! A clever half-way measure, H. t x

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 12 October 2006

I love it...'I am swimming with sparks'...yes! Add this to comments I've already made about this series, Herbert. Nice. L

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