From Real Heart Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

From Real Heart

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He was in full rage
The words can not be put on page
It was full of filthy test
I tried to stop him at my best

Neither was he drunk
Nor under spell to sink
The inner grudge had spelled out
What he could not was now in full burst

I heard him saying all nonsense
But could do nothing as he was out of sense
He omitted complete venom
The words can be forgotten seldom

Yes sometimes it is helplessness
Man can not speak openly on face
He has some compulsion
He thinks much of the time with confusion

I thought for awhile
And felt relieved with smile
He had spoken with full ire
I realized its essence and admired

He was misguided
Now I have time to be confided
I decided call him and make thing clear
He need not keep any kind of fear

We sat for break fast and conversed
He was feeling guilty and offered
An apology for spoken ill words
I told him to forget and look forward

He did nothing to speak again
He was in agony and pain
I felt he was in remorse
I forgave him from heart of course

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

He was in full rage The words can not be put on page

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

Very nice Megan Hedgecock2 minutes ago Story of forgiveness

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

Cool Kayla ClarkLess than a minute ago Cool Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

Lisa Lombardi likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

What a mature and large hearted response to an angry ourburst! And What a wonderful lesson on Anger Management! Thanks for sharing, Hasmukhji. Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India Apr 14,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

noel elnol beautiful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

reeana lutra good.. really good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

keaobaka Beautiful. beautiful. Nothing is as beautiful as being forgiven by a friend you have wronged. you could not have shared a better gift with him. thanks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

full rage & out of sense - how emotions burst out when for a long time they go unsaid. Many times inner pain causes this, as you've said here and said so well. 4 hours ago by Mn. Rachel to From real heart

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

Cool! Linda Bycoskie2 hours ago A positive message of reflection and introspection Comment +1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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