under the radar
a guile master
pulls the strings ~~
this orange puppet
dances to his tune
© 2016
Can't believe that we have come down to this. Great senryu!
This is so funny. The orange puppet does not even know that his strings are being pulled.
Top notch stuff. Love the irony of the tanka and love the title even more.
Great satire and clever composition. I loved the tanka.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Maybe not under the radar much longer. LOL