Friday, February 26, 2016

Frustration Of The King Comments

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But time has come when he became indifferent,
To wine, to poetry, to women.
it all to him became too real.
too real to compete his dream.
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Liza Sud
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Edward Kofi Louis 01 March 2016

Too real to complete his dream. Taken into another realm. Thanks for sharing.

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Paul Amrod 28 February 2016

Hi Liza, Without some spiritual guidance or inspiration life is half as fulfilling. I felt the king's frustration and felt his emptiness resulting in pain. Very nice verse. I wanted to invite you to enjoy my newer poems if you have time. Warmest greetings, Paul

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Sumit Ganguly 28 February 2016

King's indifference to youth-pleasures cause frustration. When he asks why and finds time to ponder, a new dimension of the same world but of different time opens up, and he finds himself. Nice poem.10

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