Full Moon Against A Blue Sky Poem by Eldon M Thomas

Full Moon Against A Blue Sky

 


She followed me around and I don’t know why
This afternoon as I drove I saw a full moon against a blue sky

There she was radiant and bright
It was after four in the afternoon but it looked close to night
The sun was still up but she reflected the sun’s light

There she stood my celestial balloon
Full and round, my old friend the moon
The sun was opposite her like an old fashioned groom
The stars were not out yet so they had lots of room

So there she was as I drove right by
Suspended in the air, white chocolate moon against a blue sky

My lovely moon shining ever so high
A natural light that doesn’t hurt my eyes
My lovely moon set against a blue sky

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jose Murguia 03 February 2009

i really like this one its very unique in its own way i like the concept and its a beatifully written poem a 10 + 10 =20!

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Ana Zaldivar 01 February 2009

Thia is bautiful, a calm poem, like a lullaby to the ears. but please take out the exclamation mark at the end, it takes out it's peace and rythm, of course only if you want to. But it is a great poem. Well written. best wishes, Ana

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