Funny Americans Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Funny Americans

Rating: 5.0


US women defeated Japanese women,
Since then tweets are raining cats and dogs,
The funny Americans twit they have taken revenge of the Pearl Harbor,
How ignorant they are, they don’t read history,
They had already taken revenge of the Pearl Harbor,
By dropping nuclear weapons on Hiroshima and Nagasaki,
Anyway it’s better to take revenge before crowd at the play grounds,
Let humanity hope a sporting future,
Let India and Pakistan fight with bat and ball.

Funny Americans
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
With thanks to BBC Urdu First Page
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 15 July 2015

i agree with Douglas Scotney! well, i HOPE i'm a funny american! i've read recently that, by some people, it was thought (and still is i'm sure) that more lives would be saved by dropping 'nuclear weapons' on Japan, rather than making a longer, more traditional, war necessary. i wouldn't doubt it. i agree the tweet is stupid and uncalled for! ! ! Please don’t tell me that the u.s. wouldn’t have used similar weapons on Germany because Germans are/were “white” people, though I’m also sure that many Americans would have felt that way then, and perhaps some would today (probably) . - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Bri’s FORM FOR COMMENTING ON POEMS: [“n/a” = not applicable to this poem] ==================================== Poem Comment Form As my shoulder I did abuse, here is what may amuse: A poem-comment “form”; I know it ain’t the norm. But if I write comments TOO long, I’ll never hear the end of the song: “Bri, I Told You, Take Care Of Shoulder; You’re Young No More & Getting Older”. So this simple form I have devised. Don’t look at me! Are you so surprised? If I use the form I MAY have more time … to read more poems with, or without, rhyme. After all, I can’t read and NOT comment, and if you must have MORE input ……….from me … send me a request ……….., though “more” AIN’T free. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A. I enjoyed it: Yes _x__ ; No___ ; I’m not telling___ B. I understood it: Yes__xx_; No___; I’m not sure___ C. I enjoyed the: Rhyming ___; Rhythm___; Originality_x__; Cleverness___; Humor/Humour___; Seriousness_xx__; Sensuality___; Humanity_xxx__; Alliterations___; Personal touch_x__; Other ___poet’s note_______ D. It makes me want to read more of your poems: Yes___; No___; I’m not telling__x_ E. The use of English was: Impeccable/good_x__; Deplorable/bad___; In between___; No comment___ F. Could use proofreading: Yes___; No__x_; You decide___ THANKS FOR SHARING. bri :) p.s. I would write ‘revenge for Pearl Harbor’ :)

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Valsa George 07 July 2015

Such sportive vengeance is so healthy and welcome! It was indeed a pleasure to watch the Women's World Cup Football! They proved that in no way they are behind men!

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Kelly Kurt 07 July 2015

I am often embarrassed to be an American. May all conflicts one day be resolved without war Thanks for sharing, Akhtar Peace

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Douglas Scotney 06 July 2015

that's tellin' 'em, Akhtar

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