Gabriel Oluwalana (Falling Of Twilight) Poem by Gabriel Oluwalana

Gabriel Oluwalana (Falling Of Twilight)

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I wander lonely every evening
Sunny days pass, shining evenings stay
Warm days go, cold evenings come
Evening dews linger upon the tree of tryst

Shedding above us, me and my beloved stay
Our host, reddish daffodils entertain with smile
Days of weep swift gone like a stream
That goes and never faces back till last

Lonely days come, I never cry I never smile
A cold night caught me alone shivering my lips
Twilight hue fell upon my head like a rain shower
Pity moments! No one to kiss my cheek

Oh! Come back thy memorial days with breeze
Venture upon my soul, with smile and glow on face
Bring back my dearie, my treasure of joy
With tryst every night on the rug of rose

Put a smile on me and live with me undefiled

Gabriel Oluwalana (Falling Of Twilight)
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 October 2021

A vivid depiction of loneliness. Poignant and touching lines seeking the return of a loved one. Beautifully crafted and expressed.

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Gabriel Oluwalana 24 March 2022

❤😘

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 September 2021

Inspired by Wordsworth? You create here own scenes through which I oft hear Wordsworth sounds. Here the daffodils grow in nature. Up there too? Fascinating words, Wordsworth mirrored. Thank you for sharing

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Gabriel Oluwalana 02 January 2023

Being inspired by many poets, Williams Wordsworth, Christopher Marlowe and John Donne are really a big deal for me.

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Gabriel Oluwalana 02 January 2023

I was inspired by my great poets, Williams Wordsworth is one among.

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Gabriel Oluwalana 24 March 2022

Love ❤😘

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