Something pierces my heart
‘tis sharper than a sword, and
Spear of any knight…
Through the eight ribs, it pierc'd
In the dark corner of my loneliness
It quickens my soul from adversity
But sometimes, put me in tears
Of true tenderness emotion…
It raises my head above the deepest ocean…
Also, raise me a dais of silk and gown;
Bend my heart like a rose bouquet
And like a tickset of apples' boughs
It subdues the laugh of hate,
But enact me a mystical cry of joy
And gives a scent of honour
It pierces my heart more deeper
I lost the lust of my heart
And I step on the path of intimacy
With passion and commitment
I live on its path… satisfaction,
Because, it's euphoria, it's LOVE.
Conmgrats, dear Gabriel, being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, amazing poem about my topic, true enjoyable read 5 Stars full. Since this POD was poblished 2 days ago, I gave this marvelous poem 5 Stars, but my comments did not show up, how terrible, but here I am.
Thanks for your comment, it has been a great inspiration for me to continue. Much love for you.
Thank you M's Sylvia for this kind gesture. I'm very grateful... By the way I learn from the best mentor.
congratulations dear Gabriel for this excellent poem, particularly the line that it subdues my laugh of hate is echoing in mind.Awesome poem on true love.
Thanks for your comment, it inspires me to continue. I have also written fiction. I love to share if message me.
Thanks for your comment, it has been a great inspiration for me to continue. I have also just finished writing a novel. I love to share if message me.
A poignant piece of poetry written from the heart. Congrats on your poem's selection as POD.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great work! Congratulations dear Gabriel
I'm grateful for the comment, please do check my new poems.