Something Pierces My Heart Poem by Gabriel Oluwalana

Something Pierces My Heart

Rating: 5.0


Something pierces my heart
‘tis sharper than a sword, and
Spear of any knight…

Through the eight ribs, it pierc'd
In the dark corner of my loneliness
It quickens my soul from adversity

But sometimes, put me in tears
Of true tenderness emotion…
It raises my head above the deepest ocean…

Also, raise me a dais of silk and gown;
Bend my heart like a rose bouquet
And like a tickset of apples' boughs

It subdues the laugh of hate,
But enact me a mystical cry of joy
And gives a scent of honour

It pierces my heart more deeper
I lost the lust of my heart
And I step on the path of intimacy

With passion and commitment
I live on its path… satisfaction,
Because, it's euphoria, it's LOVE.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Mitea 21 May 2022

Great work! Congratulations dear Gabriel

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Gabriel Oluwalana 02 January 2023

I'm grateful for the comment, please do check my new poems.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 May 2022

Conmgrats, dear Gabriel, being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, amazing poem about my topic, true enjoyable read 5 Stars full. Since this POD was poblished 2 days ago, I gave this marvelous poem 5 Stars, but my comments did not show up, how terrible, but here I am.

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Gabriel Oluwalana 02 January 2023

Thanks for your comment, it has been a great inspiration for me to continue. Much love for you.

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Gabriel Oluwalana 03 June 2022

Thank you M's Sylvia for this kind gesture. I'm very grateful... By the way I learn from the best mentor.

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Nabakishore Dash 19 May 2022

congratulations dear Gabriel for this excellent poem, particularly the line that it subdues my laugh of hate is echoing in mind.Awesome poem on true love.

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Gabriel Oluwalana 02 January 2023

Thanks for your comment, it inspires me to continue. I have also written fiction. I love to share if message me.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 May 2022

Gabe, this is a beautiful and proper poem Bravo! Bravo!

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Gabriel Oluwalana 02 January 2023

Thanks for your comment, it has been a great inspiration for me to continue. I have also just finished writing a novel. I love to share if message me.

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Chinedu Dike 19 May 2022

A poignant piece of poetry written from the heart. Congrats on your poem's selection as POD.

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