Garden Of Eden Poem by Saul Palti

Garden Of Eden



Your helping me be what I want to be
for healthy as ever what can free freedom
eating for the tree is very easy
set in steel set in stone leave me Adam
when I dance and sing I bring daytime
for you walk out of my life twice as nice
Eve stole her treat our stolen sunken mine
my twice as good through the hood my last vice
this belief is not as bad as it seems
best start believing in the power of might
setting the hype and everlasting themes
a Sunday rest for every waves delight
there I belong for every nights a dream
as I ponder a lacklustre scheme

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 October 2021

Plz also do read and comment my newest poem too titled, ' squash the hate hate bug'

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 October 2021

Fab word choice in sublime muse here and im not sure that's what you meant but the garden of Eden does inspire us the believers towards doing good. Kudos for the poem

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