Garden Poetry Poem by Lindsay Elise

Garden Poetry



So there’s this poet in my garden.
He sits right by the willow tree.
Listening to the words I say,
As he morphs them into beauty.
I don’t know how he does it,
It’s like some magic feat,
Because what comes out from my mouth
Is much more incomplete.
The birds, they always listen
And sing to every note.
He says my words so fluently,
On every breath they dote.
The crickets also eavesdrop
Upon my newest friend.
They applaud him with their symphony
When he comes to end.
I try to go and visit him
Though oft he isn’t there.
He’s off to save some other girl,
Who of her gift is unaware.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lindsay Elise 25 June 2006

aw you're both too cute

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Chi - 24 June 2006

I kind of like this poem! It's very appealing the way it portrays a garden scene, say at the beginning of spring! I also like the fact that you have to read it over to grasp the inner meaning. Yes, I agree with Patricia that it's a beautiful poem and that Linday's gift shines through it!

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Patricia Gale 23 June 2006

And your gift shines w/ this write! Patricia

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