Friday, May 9, 2025

Garden Snake Comments

Rating: 5.0

A simple serpent
Visited the garden mine
Would I take notice
Would I use my garden spade
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Rob Lamberton
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Aarzoo Mehek 25 June 2025

Just let it be. It's just a visit to test your patience

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Koffi B Sossou 10 May 2025

But if his humbleness and simplicity turn into a disguise, then there could be a garden grave.

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Koffi B Sossou 10 May 2025

'A simple serpent, a humble serpent'. If this serpent is a simple and humble as the speaker said, then he or she shouldn't worry.

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Nabakishore Dash 10 May 2025

Very nice lines really.But from the figure it does appear a not simple one.

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Anjandev Roy 10 May 2025

I dare not avert my eyes..... significant...

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A serpent symbolizes temptation and evil. We must not succumb to its temptation. A thought provoking and wonderful poem with great images. It reminds me of the Garden of Eden.

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