Spock the Vegan

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Gazing On A Star - Poem by Spock the Vegan

What if you had your immortal body,
Not your present one that is shoddy.
I mean the one that can't be killed,
So going to the sun you won't be grilled.

How would it be to fly to the sun!
Wouldn't that be a lot of fun?
To pass through two million degrees in the corona
And not be blinded or even get glaucoma!

To fly through a solar prominence
Displaying your universe dominance,
And gaze upon the spectacles there
While hovering in the photosphere!

To see the ionized gas known as plasma
And breathe it in without getting asthma!
And see a coronal mass ejection,
All possible because of your resurrection!

(See 2 Timothy 1: 10)

Topic(s) of this poem: astronomy , glaucoma, immortality, resurrection, star, sun, universe

Form: Couplet

Comments about Gazing On A Star by Spock the Vegan

  • Spock The Vegan (2/5/2016 1:33:00 PM)

    The picture above is a coronal mass ejection (a solar flare) . (Report) Reply

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  • Kim Barney (9/7/2015 6:40:00 PM)

    Why am I getting uncomfortably warm?
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  • Fabrizio Frosini (9/7/2015 2:45:00 PM)


    human curiosity has no limits... ;)

    greetings from Italy
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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 7, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, February 5, 2016

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