heavenly wishes reason to glow
enlighten soul deep within
heart knows well reeks of sorrow
words inspiring leads to light
dream onshore resurrects faster,
as gleams of bliss bestow upon
head touches feet genuflecting
as reed latches on etching smile
yet in between, lie cliff and chasm
for truth as it needs blessing divine
heart sneaks slowly into whispers of hope
sun turns dawn pounding darkness to dulcet
yet it is golden whispers let me awake
to smear dream over the soul to smooch
and i keep golden shadow stifling beneath
let your blessing by hope of tomorrow transcends within
Wow is the first word that comes to mind when i first read this. it is truely an elegantly written heartfelt piece with both theological tones and pesonal hidden deeep inside your words. it is wonderful! Jen
After trauma of any kind 'heart sneaks slowly into hope' and you have outlined hope here and underscored it as being the way of transcendence - - excellent verse....10 from Fay
Succumb to prayer enwraps the heart inturn wraps your into this lovely poem deep words ++++++++10 regards
Thank you for sharing your beautiful art. Superb write. Poemhunter is fortunate to have you.10/10. Always your friend, Sandra
Tenderly written and your experience madeyou realise how fragile life is, well composed 10 Lynda xx
Excellent.......deep and meaningful..........liked it.........
So deep, sometimes we need something to remind us with the mercy of God, nicely written with strong phrases & structure, good job
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
but for the grace of God.....a beautiful piece....nicely done