poet Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! * Green Of Wild*! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

goodness reasons to revel by reality
heart yet knows right path to heaven
eyes raves back by illusion of mirage
light refluxes into room of delusion

do we ever know depth of eyes by mystery?
as sands gleaned on shore delving blue
myth of blindness yet they still read
moment swirls by winds unfolding dreams

moon seems to be here on top of hill
whispers allays sorrow by voices
where is the time lost to living,
life when reasoned to grip of wine
as desire mills through green of wild.

Poem Submitted: Monday, February 2, 2009

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  • Obinna Eruchie (6/3/2009 10:20:00 AM)

    a deeply thought provoking poem, good poetry.

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  • Randy Hogan (2/20/2009 1:49:00 PM)

    I read this poem a think....really how deep is your soul...
    since space is a bubble.....and not infinite...at lest not our plan,
    maybe our soul is so large we have to fold it..to fit into cosmos.
    but still remain in GODs hands........
    A moving poem so well done.....................

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  • Alicia Maestri (2/20/2009 11:21:00 AM)

    Much better, reaching into your soul, looking for answers to real questions, i liked it alot.

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (2/18/2009 4:09:00 PM)

    If all in life is an illusion then what is real? Truth is in the eye of the beholder but do each of us see it the same way? I gave you another ten.Very thought provoking poem.thank you...

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  • Maria Barbara Korynt (2/18/2009 4:04:00 PM)

    Very much nicely written. Excellent workshop, is always recognizable :) before me they said so a lot, that here to add nothing - to take hold of nothing. I like it.
    I am greeting :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (2/14/2009 12:27:00 AM)

    now this is good poetry. Great read, great imagery... perfect piece

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  • Ramesh T ARamesh T A (2/11/2009 2:37:00 PM)

    It alludes to the good old theme - clash between reason and passion. It is old wine in another bottle for me, friend!

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  • Reihaneh Jalalian (2/10/2009 5:11:00 AM)

    very cool. and the title was very nice
    thanks for sharing 10

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  • Sreelekha Premjit (2/10/2009 12:20:00 AM)

    This is absolutely beautiful....I turn green with envy..

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  • Rinzu Susan Rajan (2/9/2009 4:00:00 AM)

    RAVISHING STUFF...FRESH GREEN CRISP POETRY......

    : D

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  • Lynda Robson (2/9/2009 4:00:00 AM)

    Beautifully crafted poem, thanks,
    10
    Lynda xx

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  • Michael P. JohnsonMichael P. Johnson (2/8/2009 3:29:00 PM)

    This! My dear friend is beautiful.......a sheer delight

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  • Chitra - (2/8/2009 1:31:00 PM)

    phrases of poetic eloquence...a beautifully crafted poem

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  • Reshma Ramesh (2/8/2009 12:42:00 AM)

    wow! ! and the mystery of the way u write............? beautifully penned

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  • Ruby Heart (2/7/2009 9:31:00 PM)

    yes, that is a bit mystery. good on writing the words togather to make a peace. very nice!

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  • Candace Quinton (2/7/2009 7:15:00 PM)

    good job keep it up the writing

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  • Alison Cassidy (2/7/2009 6:34:00 PM)

    Your poetry makes sense, even when it is difficult to understand. You use words uniquely, poetically and spiritually. The result is always surprising, always worthwhile. Your green of wild excites and delights. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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  • Catrina Heart (2/7/2009 10:06:00 AM)

    a fabulous composition sir...a mind creeping poem...Free will tells us what is the right thing to do with the guidance of the heart to have a loving and comforting move to way up us in heaven.....great! ...10+++

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  • Moushumi moushumi (2/7/2009 7:21:00 AM)

    It splendors my mind to reach with my ownself & be with myself & live with my eyes charmed with thoughts of divine grace.10+

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  • Vaibhav Pandey (2/7/2009 4:24:00 AM)

    awesome poem sir......just excellent.
    10

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