Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 383,068 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Get The Exposure - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

It makes me to feel weak
As if someone deliberately kicks
Offers ingratitude with no comments
Poet is left with no course but to resent

I suggest one post for two reads
That may offer chance to lead
Offer good articles at no competition
Where else to go and offer petition?

It may not be heard at all
Good suggestions may certainly fall
Same old story and lonely walk with stick
From where else the threads to pick?

We know honey may attract the bees
They can go on any flowers and feel free
As it is their job to pick the best
So can we not do it here for the rest?

Let each one of us get the exposure?
Present the best article and assure
That it stands for best in contents
It may stand any test if further sent

I wish it to happen here
Rules must follow what is fair
If tree has to grow with deep roots
It must be onward march with confident foot


Comments about Get The Exposure by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (8/26/2012 3:05:00 AM)


    very good advice! an interesting poem! (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/26/2012 1:26:00 AM)


    It makes me to feel wick
    As if someone deliberately kicks
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 26, 2012


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