Gift Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Amazing! 10++

outstanding romance in that little piece....

amazing reshma...you know your stuff onle a person with great confidence an inner vision can say so much in so les cheers its atenner

Awesome expressions of inner thoughts, through a few words, once again!

simply wonder in the land of moon, ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10++++, thanks forsharing

...and a 10+++ for your poem, Reshma.

**Moon of the Fourteenth Reality was under the feet Gaze to the moon to ride onto heaven What real love in the mysticism of nature Myself I felt with the tips of my fingers Breathing self is what life is What moon from ages of creations To many was a mirror for their faces In craters read names of their loves Into half to show miracles manifest Desert red for the Majnun in the wild Sewen by the young girl to her frock Is in half behind the veil black The moon with pride and prejudice Oceans in emotions when in full Life it sustains not so is it harmless Aye in the dark of the night it goes hiding Behind the clouds we counted stars Not for luck but play of the child Again was the moon like sun from the east On the beloved it shines like shines on the lover Taketh my lesson O heart dear lament not The dropp of thy tear for the beloved that ye shed Is moon of the fourteenth and nothing else on thy chest

What a creative poem with just two lines. Moon represents the subconscious mind and emotions and your poem so cleverly indicates this is not what you want. Wonderful work Reshma. 10 Karin Anderson

i liked the mystic nature of the love, expressed inside this line...