I have lived life a thousand years
at that one moment
when i hid in our arms,
as i looked in your eyes,
i saw a million doves
in flight towards peace
and all that had to be said and
realized now unknown
all the memories of yesterday
faded into the oblivious
if i had another moment
only if i had another minute
to be loved like you loved
me yesterday
then i would have lived a
thousand years more
i would have died a
thousand deaths more.
Well written and you are gifted. Let the flow come from ur hands always in heart and soul.........
This poem is so original in its concept of 1,000 years and your uplifting words carry me right into your beautiful magical piece of writing. Karin Anderson
When i hid in our arms- when i hid in your arms the expression of the sexual love is well deep rooted as pictured in the poem. shan
Been reading through some of your stuff. This one's a real stunner. Love it...Don't stop writing :) !
Timelessly beautiful. One moment can seem like forever.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra
Reshma, Do let me know when your book is out, I will buy a copy, hopefully signed by you :) You are an exotic poet. The words just overflow with sensuousness. The poem on your Orkut Profile is outstanding too. I wish I had some of your experiences, would love to write somewhat like you some day. God bless.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such sincere and intense feelings and emotions have been the subject of good poetry always! Loved reading! -Raj Nandy