A Thousand Years More Poem by Reshma Ramesh

A Thousand Years More

Rating: 3.5

I have lived life a thousand years
at that one moment
when i hid in our arms,
as i looked in your eyes,
i saw a million doves
in flight towards peace
and all that had to be said and
realized now unknown
all the memories of yesterday
faded into the oblivious
if i had another moment
only if i had another minute
to be loved like you loved
me yesterday
then i would have lived a
thousand years more
i would have died a
thousand deaths more.

Raj Nandy 06 March 2009

Such sincere and intense feelings and emotions have been the subject of good poetry always! Loved reading! -Raj Nandy

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acharya gopinath 09 March 2009

Well written and you are gifted. Let the flow come from ur hands always in heart and soul.........

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This poem is so original in its concept of 1,000 years and your uplifting words carry me right into your beautiful magical piece of writing. Karin Anderson

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 17 March 2009

When i hid in our arms- when i hid in your arms the expression of the sexual love is well deep rooted as pictured in the poem. shan

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Roshni D'Souza 17 March 2009

Been reading through some of your stuff. This one's a real stunner. Love it...Don't stop writing :) !

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Michael Hopkins 24 October 2023

Life goes on

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Sandra Fowler 17 December 2009

Timelessly beautiful. One moment can seem like forever.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra

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Jude Pereira 03 September 2009

A classic within a classic...

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Raj Arumugam 04 August 2009

the poem has a beautiful flow and rhythm...love it.

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Rajesh Kumar 03 June 2009

Reshma, Do let me know when your book is out, I will buy a copy, hopefully signed by you :) You are an exotic poet. The words just overflow with sensuousness. The poem on your Orkut Profile is outstanding too. I wish I had some of your experiences, would love to write somewhat like you some day. God bless.

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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