Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 384,069 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Give In - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Give in

Love me forever
and miss me dear
this is how we shall miss
and enjoy love's trace

it is good beginning
as sun is shining
over head
for us to lead

I shall consider my self lucky
as you have agreed already
we shall move step by step
and certainly keep

not beauty alone
but our resolve even
it shall help to progress
when we talk face to face

give in
and let us win
this beautiful journey
with the blessing from an almighty

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 15, 2015



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