Give Peacea Chance Poem by me poet yeps poet

Give Peacea Chance

Rating: 4.2


Give Peace a Chance

It is cold very cold freezing temperatures
a mild drizzle
yet unmindful she stands silently
like a statue under the loneliest tree

all about her come and see
why such depth of silence
they wonder who is she
so very sweet and lovely
is fine a veritable Divine

her eyes don't blink
stark into the daylight distant
rare vision
no one knows where she is looking

Yet her mission is just to draw
a large searching crowd
who will come and see
where she is looking
what is her message! ! !

Blank into the distant horizon
expansive wilderness
mind totally blissfully absent

all come and shed a tear
many say smile
O dear

she has a silent demeanour
yet she conveys
why this War and trouble

Give Peace a chance

a tear falls
then ups her umbrella
mission complete
it snows now nonstop
having conveyed her message
give a chance to PEACE
Let all live like friends kith and kin

moves out to the distance
so obscure

So all sing and say as a single voice
pray

Give Peace a chance you may.


NOTE FROM POET ME

Please give some meaningful comments
to help improve this POEMIC version
of attaining World Peace

Friday, August 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: blank,eyes,horizon,peace,peaceful,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
me poet yeps poet 11 May 2021

THIS WAS A 5 POINT POEM THE MORE IT IS READ THE POINTS COME DOWN PL EXAMINE PH

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Savita Tyagi 19 February 2021

It's a pleasure to read this beautiful poem again. Its message as relevant today as was yesterday.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 September 2018

Man never gave a chance to the goddess of peace and he will never give it to her. I don't know wy we think war is a game. Wars give only adhoc solutions. An amazing poem written in love of peace.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 September 2018

Grateful thanks sir for ur lovely comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 August 2018

Though it is very cold freezing temperature and mild drizzle yet she stands silently like a statue under the loneliest tree due to the shock and scare in her mind about the war and trouble. We get lifeless bodies and havoc only from war and nothing else. But we need peace ever. Let all live like friends kith and kin. The title of the poem 'Give Peace a Chance' is appropriated as per depiction. The way of presentation is unique and startling. A beautiful poem.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 August 2018

Thank you sir for ur kindest visit and unique comments they energiise my nerves hindi translation has also been posted

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 August 2018

title typo GIVE PEACE A CHANCE

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