Given What It Gives Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Given What It Gives

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Given what it gives
Till notso to rain clouds cleaves,
Drops drip down tree leaves.
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Haiku |09.12.15|

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Watching the drained out white clouds, watching the raindrops dripping down the tree leaves, this Haiku occurred to me.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2019

Oh what a great haiku relating to nature! Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 May 2019

This was written a few years back, but in such sultry hot weather we already see dreams of rains. Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 May 2019

tears relieve sullen heart; cloudy tears come as rain drop to clean what taken

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 May 2019

Thanks for the poetic feedback, Mahtab Bangalee.

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