Giving Advice Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Giving Advice



If the energy I receive comes naturally or stimulated,
By a multi-vitamin I take.
Or a drink that is free of additives,
To initiate a motivation I keep sustained...
With a doing that remains constant?
WHY do you attempt to convince me,
I am putting my health at risk?
When I have witnessed most of my life,
Those giving advice...
Either do it from couches,
Where they lay or sit to munch on chips...
While critiquing 'my' choices.
Or another with more healthier habits.

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