Giving Up Poem by Brooke Luchich

Giving Up

Rating: 5.0


I no longer want to fight so I’m doing the one thing I said I would never do,
I’m giving in and letting you win even though I don’t really want to.
You have taken away everything in this world that’s important to me,
And if I no longer have any of that then there’s no way that I can be happy.
I always promised myself that I would never back down no matter what,
But you’ve taken away my life, my love and every piece of happiness I’ve got.
I’m not quite sure that I deserve this or what it is that I’ve done so wrong,
But I don’t care anymore now that you’ve taken away my reason to be strong.
My smile is gone and along with that the girl I thought I knew so well,
It’s like my heart’s been ripped out and all that’s left now is an empty shell.
The will to keep pushing through is gone and now I don’t even want to try,
My only comfort now is my room where I’m alone and free to cry.
I hate you for this, for all of the horrible things that you have done,
You wanted to destroy my life well congratulations you’ve won.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amelia Loe 18 October 2009

I really loved how truthful and honest this was, the emptiness that can be felt, I can relate

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Ahtivah Lawton 25 July 2009

once again you have done it.....luv it

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Megan Ewing 16 July 2009

Wow. Once again a poem I can relate too.

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