Brooke Luchich

I Miss You

No matter what my mood you could always brighten my day,
When it came to making me smile or laugh you could always find a way.
I loved how we could sit and talk for hours just about ‘stuff’,
Not needing to do anything else just being with you was enough.
To be honest I miss you more than you could ever know,
To have you back there’s no limit as to how far I’d go.
When you held me in your arms I felt like nothing could hurt me,
You could always make me feel as safe as one person could be.
I’ll always love you and I promise that will remain forever true,
There’s no one in this world that could come close to replacing you.
So I just wanted to say sorry for all that has been said and done,
I guess I just wanted to live a little and have some fun.
I know I messed up and gave up someone who was always there,
I’m sorry for everything but baby just know that I still do care.
I wish I could change what happened between us two,
Then maybe there would still be a me and you.

Poem Submitted: Monday, June 15, 2009

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (3/29/2020 4:52:00 AM)

    Very powerfully and movingly penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing.

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (3/29/2018 5:47:00 AM)

    I know I messed up and gave up someone who was always there,
    I’m sorry for everything but baby just know that I still do care...love is a mystery..... we make mistakes but we learn from it....... thank you dear poetess. tony

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  • Megan Sandifer (7/15/2009 4:08:00 PM)

    I like this poem.Its very touching :) Good job.! Keep up the good work.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2009 11:43:00 PM)

    No matter what my mood you could always brighten my day,
    miss always make us amiss..... beautiful write dear... keep it up. but i thin we are still stealing each other's ideas...... m glad u have same ideas..


    read mine' miss, I miss you,

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  • Kerrie Tyler (6/18/2009 5:07:00 PM)

    This made me cry, reminds me of my boyfriend before he passed away.. ^^ thanks for writing such a great poem.. i love it

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  • Tracey Wynn (6/16/2009 8:49:00 PM)

    Interesting poem. Good writing. I give it a 10

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