Things I Love Poem by Brooke Luchich

Things I Love

Rating: 5.0


To name all the things I love about him would take me all day,
How do you describe each thing? I don’t even know what to say.
I guess the place to start would be the first time we ever met,
The way that he smiled at me is something I’ll never forget.
It amazed me at how quickly he swept me off my feet,
Every time he said my name it made my heart skip a beat.
I loved the way I got goosebumps whenever he kissed my neck,
How he always called me beautiful even when I looked like a wreck.
Total happiness was being wrapped up in his warm embrace,
And the way he always managed to put a smile upon my face.
Feeling that much love could only be described as pure bliss,
And my definition of heaven would have to be each and every kiss.
I’d never known a feeling like it and of that I was sure,
He was everything I could ever want or dream of and more.
If I could have just one wish, I know exactly what it would be,
I’d wish to go back to those days when it was just him and me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 13 July 2009

its a blessing 2 experience things such az these. i have a few memories of my own. I love how you express yourslef in your writing. its honest and down to earth. scale1-10...10 =]

0 0 Reply
Ahtivah Lawton 02 July 2009

How he always called me beautiful even when I looked like a wreck...gotta luv it...wow ur a really gifted writer..pleeze send me anymore poems that u have writeen..such a fan now! ! !

0 0 Reply

i like this it shows alot of emoitons and well wrote great job

0 0 Reply

i like this it is very well wrote and deals with alot of emotions great job

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success