GLEAMS OF DELIGHT
stance seems to revel by voices whispering
yet eyes meanders into window on world
for gleams of delight what soul yet needs
just as a quest of wave splashes onshore.
breath of breeze ramifies along hasty stream
lest green on leaf resolves vesper evening
may grin of green ramble over sultry meadow
passion when knows the rungs of rainbow
ocean raves up by glimmering tunes of moon
dune of sands as raveled respires deep
as tide and ebb echo across crest and trough
like rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth
who would decipher code for way to heaven?
life when mortal and fragile by earthly living
shadow yet riffles by storm on the milieu
still we need to smile onto last dreg of wine
do we ever know very art of curve by meaning?
heart still aspires to blaze glory of immortality
eternity never lays back to meet chord infinite
as verdure oscillates in between time and space
Normally it is hard for me to get into a poem that is not rymed or metered, however, this poem was easy to enjoy and kept me interested throughout it's entirety. Thanks for the invite, well worth it.
My goodness- this is a delightful poem with vivid images that makes nature glow- thanks for sharing. a 10
Delightful reading.... connection of soul and nature Deep rooted thoughts Ultimately results gleams of delight.. Thank you for sharing..10+
i finally got a chance to read one of your poems....... gleams of delight...... and i must admit that it is very good and it got me to think. nice read tnx. samantha
Great job! Thank you for painting such a beautiful picture with the stroke of Your words.
your word play paints a vivid image to me. Well done my friend
A vista of colours and breathtaking visuals has just opened up before my eyes when I read this... the last paragraph in particular makes me tearful in a good way. Powerful, yet softly beautiful piece... almost dreamy in some aspects ie. in the use of words to conjure up the images.
You can tell you didnt just slop this poem together. you definitely put a lot of time and thinking into this poem. Great job! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth...like a human earth desire to live more...dr. kar's true love for environment enlivens his thoughts and ideology...regards lovita j r morang