Dr subhendu kar

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! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ****gleams Of Delight*****! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

GLEAMS OF DELIGHT

stance seems to revel by voices whispering
yet eyes meanders into window on world
for gleams of delight what soul yet needs
just as a quest of wave splashes onshore.

breath of breeze ramifies along hasty stream
lest green on leaf resolves vesper evening
may grin of green ramble over sultry meadow
passion when knows the rungs of rainbow

ocean raves up by glimmering tunes of moon
dune of sands as raveled respires deep
as tide and ebb echo across crest and trough
like rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth

who would decipher code for way to heaven?
life when mortal and fragile by earthly living
shadow yet riffles by storm on the milieu
still we need to smile onto last dreg of wine

do we ever know very art of curve by meaning?
heart still aspires to blaze glory of immortality
eternity never lays back to meet chord infinite
as verdure oscillates in between time and space


Comments about ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ****gleams Of Delight*****! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! by Dr subhendu kar

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (3/26/2010 10:29:00 AM)


    i finally got a chance to read one of your poems....... gleams of delight...... and i must admit that it is very good and it got me to think.

    nice read tnx.

    samantha
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  • (3/23/2010 3:44:00 AM)


    Great job! Thank you for painting such a beautiful picture with the stroke of
    Your words.
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  • (3/22/2010 9:22:00 PM)


    your word play paints a vivid image to me. Well done my friend (Report) Reply

  • (3/16/2010 3:28:00 AM)


    A vista of colours and breathtaking visuals has just opened up before my eyes when I read this... the last paragraph in particular makes me tearful in a good way. Powerful, yet softly beautiful piece... almost dreamy in some aspects ie. in the use of words to conjure up the images. (Report) Reply

  • (3/16/2010 1:25:00 AM)


    You can tell you didnt just slop this poem together. you definitely put a lot of time and thinking into this poem. Great job! ! (Report) Reply

  • (3/11/2010 3:29:00 AM)


    I must say, it is not only a poem on nature... to me... it's a canvas.. :) (Report) Reply

  • (3/10/2010 8:43:00 AM)


    A nice poem that ebbs and flows...

    ocean raves up by glimmering tunes of moon
    dune of sands as raveled respires deep
    as tide and ebb echo across crest and trough
    like rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth
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  • Ravi A (3/10/2010 7:02:00 AM)


    The last line is the real stamp of the poem. Life is like this. It is a continuous flow. We have to accept the truth. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • (3/9/2010 10:24:00 AM)


    Real Nice poem. Very deep thinking! (Report) Reply

  • (3/9/2010 10:04:00 AM)


    I like the third stanza.

    Ocean raves up by glimmering tunes of moon
    Dune of sands as raveled respires deep,
    As tide and ebb acho across crest and trough
    Like rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth.

    A beautiful poem about nature.
    Have a nice day.


    B.B.
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  • (3/5/2010 6:02:00 AM)


    Delightful reading.... connection of soul and nature

    Deep rooted thoughts

    Ultimately results gleams of delight..

    Thank you for sharing..10+
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  • (3/4/2010 8:48:00 PM)


    My goodness- this is a delightful poem with vivid images that makes nature glow- thanks for sharing. a 10 (Report) Reply

  • (3/3/2010 2:04:00 PM)


    An enjoyment to read. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (3/1/2010 12:18:00 PM)


    Normally it is hard for me to get into a poem that is not rymed or metered, however, this poem was easy to enjoy and kept me interested throughout it's entirety. Thanks for the invite, well worth it. (Report) Reply

  • Lovita Morang (3/1/2010 1:42:00 AM)


    rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth...like a human earth desire to live more...dr. kar's true love for environment enlivens his thoughts and ideology...regards lovita j r morang (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (2/27/2010 3:28:00 PM)


    Subhendu - the English Language must smile with delight every time you write a poem! I know of no-one who delights more visibly in each beautifully-turned phrase.
    Thank you for sharing your delight.
    Mary
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  • (2/25/2010 4:33:00 PM)


    'ocean raves up by glimmering tunes of moon
    dune of sands as raveled respires deep
    as tide and ebb echo across crest and trough
    like rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth'

    Beautiful imagery Dr Subhendu, through out your poem. I loved above quoted lines particularly.
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  • (2/22/2010 9:15:00 PM)


    Good. Packed with nice imagery and meaningful thoughts conveyed.
    I really enjoyed the gleams of delight you expressed here.
    Thank you for sharing.

    Gautam.
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  • (2/22/2010 4:09:00 PM)


    'like rain in summer elightens thirsty earht'.
    a breathtaking poem with a metaphysical truth.
    i am beginning to hate this business of a 10 for a poem.
    i would not give Shakespeare a 10 either. just eternal praise.

    john
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  • (2/22/2010 3:18:00 PM)


    beautifuly writen
    its got deep meaning. i love it
    10++++
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