Glimpse Of The Moon From The Window Poem by Lauren Michaels

Glimpse Of The Moon From The Window

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The moon is perfect tonight.
A low golden slit
Obscured By shadow.
An eigth of itself
Beaming
on the unnecessary whole.
Making its half hearted point so eloquently.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 30 September 2006

''unnecessary whole'' nice.

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Dee Daffodil 14 July 2006

Wow...awesome imagery...a low golden slit...an eight of itself...wonderful. Well done Hugs, Dee

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