Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,692 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***global Village ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

heart awes by humanistic stream divine
as rocking across universe and evolution
man and matter resound in own volition eclectic
through ages and eons above as redounding

our quest and queries smack of innovations
on facets diverse of mankind descending
in its rungs of varied class consciousness
as riffling always as complex yet filtering

search seems befuddled and bewildered yet wild
state of apprehension racks up prevailing upon
voluptuous are our way of thinking hedonistic
at times bereft of rationale in niche of ruin

varying degrees of habitations do exist notwithstanding
may be crux of matter meant materials vituperating
with feelings of strata of skins endearing high
alas! survival is the fittest not by creed and color

are we not all same in ages and years before?
as same redness of blood and gene replication
in the order of descend /descent with modification –
where words of Darwin come coupling in between

do we assuage in rungs of color by distinction
in white, black or brown of varying phenotypes?
effect of super sensitivity never swoons humanity
genotypes by gene in helix twitters in homosapiens

natural selection peeks in periods of evolution
but by little changes retrogressive or progressive
lineage simulates to need of hours by mutation
utility of expansion of human lays back by eternity

civilization heaps up healing so and so forth
don’t we visualize whole gamut of development
heaving crest of socialization ever and years after?
there comes human feelings as crooning steep

eyes mist in askance of life and living entwined
as intonation of our words are streaming in verse......
don`t we meet same feelings as we lie in living?
being elsewhere on this earth deliberating values

earth converges upon to a simple global village
drawing nearer and nearer to neighboring close
we conquer time and distance by science and space
let the love and peace be sole motto our intention


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  • (3/4/2010 2:40:00 PM)

    ‘…voluptuous are our way of thinking hedonistic…’

    In consumerist society it’s the magic mantra…and ads lure and conjure with out poring salivation of us…global village is clichéd...now can we think of global villa…? a grat leap forward But it mustn’t be lip-service-sermon…great thought
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (2/24/2010 11:47:00 PM)

    it was worth reading because of the last line.being a Christian 'let the love and peace be sole motto our intention' is my 'philosophy' too though we may
    beg to differ in other ways.

    john o'connell
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  • (12/16/2009 5:27:00 PM)

    Doctor, your work has an lineal connectedness to the great Allen Ginsberg, which in high regard is a mighty compliment. (Report)Reply

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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (11/29/2009 4:44:00 AM)

    From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13)
    To : Dr.subhendu Kar
    Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : Re: hello,

    Dear fellow poet
    your poems were wonderful
    you are very talented
    I enjoyed reading your other poems to.
    I look up to you.
    Thank you.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/25/2009 11:47:00 PM)

    earth converges upon to a simple global village
    drawing nearer and nearer to neighboring close
    we conquer time and distance by science and space
    let the love and peace be sole motto our intention...very honest desire and evrybody should strive hard to make it success... lovely imagination..i liked the idea....10

    read mine message....welcome.... message
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  • Kassem Oude (9/25/2009 7:08:00 AM)

    Such verses should belong to a great poet like you. A man owns great soul, we all are from the same mankind and we should treat each other in accordance with humanly values. mature poetry. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/25/2009 2:51:00 AM)

    Just a word - WOW! ! ! !
    May the peace and love be with us.
    Thanks for sharing it.. It's worth to ponder on.
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (9/24/2009 12:31:00 PM)

    thought provoking! beautiful wording! finger towards truths!
    10+
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  • (9/18/2009 12:15:00 PM)

    let the love and peace be sole motto our intention
    ...............................................................................

    Subhendu, pleasantly for me your kind plan .... 10 x10
    Best wishes,
    Tsira
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  • (9/16/2009 5:26:00 PM)

    A great write with much truth. I like the last stanza-the world is a village. (Report)Reply

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  • Saadat Tahir (9/15/2009 2:06:00 AM)

    I largely agree with my friend Carl…..
    However I would like to point out a flaw in the clubbing of Asian poets…
    From India we also have our revered Dr Reshma Ramesh.. a master of short poetry…and we even have a gentleman who has invented ONEREYU… single word poems… we cud debate that separately.
    Look at vidi, mamta, indira

    There are top poets in asia who write very concise and crisp poetry…
    Coming to this poem…yes a bit drawn out (I too am a culprit there) yet nice read…and has a definite theme

    Keep it up dr cheers
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  • (9/15/2009 1:12:00 AM)

    You have brought me back in time and take me to ponder on about what we are now............Great written poem 10++++++++++++ Thanks! (Report)Reply

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  • (9/14/2009 10:30:00 AM)

    the last stanza reflects idealism of the poet... (Report)Reply

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  • (9/13/2009 7:23:00 PM)

    As seems to be the habit with many Indian and other poets of Asia, this interesting poem is a long one, ten four line verses. It tends to ramble a bit, as all such long poems usually do, and in doing so, the impact of the words tend to be lost along the way. Were this poem expressed in five or six verses, I think it would have been more effective. Still, it was an interesting and scholarly read but one lacking in emotion, a crucial element of all poetry. It certainly was not a bad poem, but I couldn't help feeling that it seemed more like a scholarly dissertation on an obscure subject and not a plea to draw attention to your subject. That lack of emotion sapped the power of your words in this poem, Dr. Kar. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/13/2009 6:25:00 PM)

    Is it not what our prehistoric ancestors had to do in order to survive. Different groups of the first homo sapiens had to band together to become stronger. We are of the same beginning...Human Genome Project is proof of that. Good strongly written poem. Thanks. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/13/2009 3:35:00 PM)

    a wonderful, powerful poem, i feel the sadness in it's background..this is a new account to let me be able to comment..wishing you are doing better dear friend (Report)Reply

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  • (9/13/2009 12:53:00 PM)

    Friend, this was very powerful and remarkable poem! Absolutely amazing! well-penned throughout! Strong words great write! You get a 10 from me! (Report)Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (9/13/2009 10:45:00 AM)

    My dear friend, this is a very powerful and well-penned, sending a straight message, brilliant, you got my 10+ vote, Love and Peace, Romeo (Report)Reply

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  • (9/13/2009 10:18:00 AM)

    the global village is vast we ourselves basically live in it...brings us together but also creates new opportunities for terrible things....racism and injustice.....it can sow lies and grow fears......brilliant write.... thought evoking :) (Report)Reply

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  • (9/13/2009 10:08:00 AM)

    earth converges upon to a simple global village
    drawing nearer and nearer to neighboring close
    we conquer time and distance by science and space
    let the love and peace be sole motto our intention
    ...very philosophical...hoping the existing racism transforms into love for each other.....10
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 12, 2009



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