! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***as Quest Riffles Deep***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***as Quest Riffles Deep***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1

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it is all through feeling of lone voice
as stuck at a point of time and space
aloofness heaves heart yet ruefully
by pangs of sorrow and separation,

quest riffles deep in void by silence
dream desiccates as a desert in summer
horizon dips in silhouettes by sunset
heart flips to know its room of repose
awe bespeaks of melding into breeze

passion meanders waking from midsummer
as glance peeks into neighbor `s window
lest resilience may find lost shadow again
love consummates cloud when explodes

sky dapples in blue by gleams of enlightenment
verdant green redeems in glaze by sun-rays
heart inflames within streaming by blood
as joy rambles over glow of own heaven
grin seems to proliferates by truth of glimpse

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Anju Addanki 20 January 2010

this so true another good one

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 June 2010

…sky dapples in blue by gleams of enlightenment verdant green redeems in glaze by sun-rays...’ ‘Sky looks for Enlightenment Thro’ entertainment In azurement Hallowed by Sun God’s Ray galore Where verdant allure’ ~ niv…imbed -> diffused -> perfuse -> suffuse 10//10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 23 January 2010

Another fantastic poem.Out of the last three posted I like this best.The poem depicts pang of separation and the desire to get back the lost link.But simultaneously, as per my understanding, the last two lines instill hope or rejuvenate the mind even under the singular condition.What I meant, if we get conditioned to a separated situation, we perhaps reorient ourselves to derive pleasure from whereever we are.

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Riyaz Gupta 21 January 2010

Use of colors in the last stanza is amazing......Amongst your new poems, I liked it the most, as here the poet seems to free himself from unnecessary burden of words.

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Anju Addanki 20 January 2010

This is so true and good one.

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Anju Addanki 20 January 2010

This is so true and good one.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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