Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 699,140 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Glorious Return - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Where will we stop?
To reach at top
With sincere effort
To take ship at port

Nowhere intent is seen
There is unruly scene
Women are targeted
Atrocities are commonly related

No safety is guaranteed
Every thing is sacrificed to greed
Where will poor men go?
What measures you think to forgo?

Freedom is for name sake
Everything is at stake
Police brutality is still there
People still think of black rule and fear

No criminals must advance
They should not be provided an escape chance
Any country may need heave of sigh
Only peace and stability they must try

We need system
Full proof to take care of concern
It is people’s turn
To think of glorious return


Comments about Glorious Return by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Suman Kumar Das (12/8/2013 8:15:00 AM)

    We need system
    Full proof to take care of concern....................... a very true picture of present situation........... loved it...........

    i also respectfully invite to read my writes and put your comments..
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2013 8:09:00 AM)

    Rohani Daud likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2013 8:04:00 AM)

    Interesting piece


    Leila A5 minutes ago
    I like your rhymes and that this has a serious message..thanks for sharing: -)
    Comment +1
    really good
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2013 8:03:00 AM)

    Rebbecca dale6 minutes ago
    thats a really nice pieace of work you have there
    Comment +1
    niceNICE
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2013 8:03:00 AM)

    Abdul aws7 minutes ago
    nice
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    Where will we stop?
    To reach at top
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 8, 2013



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