Glow Poem by Raveendran N.V.

Glow

Rating: 3.0


The sun flows through wedge
Among trees on the hill top.
The giant glow- worm.

The loss of dear ones
Between advaita and me;
Does living enthrall?

In your eyes for ever
A dropp of solitude smiles!
Wrinkles and grayness.

My thoughtfulness is
No source to your ‘sourcefulness’.
Moth mating with lamp.

Scattering thoughts, pain,
Your lifeless anxiety;
Cooing dove in nest.


Sadness plays a note;
My eyelids twitch and release
Perennial anguish.

Amidst all life gleams
When the sun glows in the east.
Nothingness doesn’t move.

Thursday, July 5, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,solitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 15 May 2008

It is a fine sincere picture, And the sun flows from yours a pray. ...10... Thanks for sharing, Raveendran... Kindest regards, Tsira

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Indira Babbellapati 10 July 2007

In your eyes for ever A dropp of solitude smiles! Wrinkles and grayness. simply loved these lines... i

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Melvina Germain 07 July 2007

A very descriptive write, I thououghly enjoyed it from start to finish.--Melvina--

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Sandra Fowler 05 July 2007

A very eloquent offering. But rather fatalistic as well. That decisive last line resonates. with the reader. Take care. As always, Sandra

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