Go Away! Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Go Away!

Rating: 3.5


A gathering came together
To compose a message.
The contents of it were very clear.
When he received it...
He did not approve of the punctuation.
He sent it back,
With his own message attached.

'Let there be no mistake,
I am responsible for my irresponsibility.
If I can admit that...
At least you can come up with a better way
To make me understand
Why...
And I want this with more clarity!
'WHY? ' do you insist on bothering me,
With your petty ways of misunderstanding
My dysfunctions?
I made that clear from the onset!
Now leave me alone
And find better use of your time!
Go away! '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R R 28 January 2007

Great Poem Lawrence, So true. Take care! !

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jim hogg 28 January 2007

Some people like to meddle. We should be free to be as dysfunctional as we like within the law. Good poem! Now I'll go away.

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Joe Breunig 28 January 2007

An interesting piece; 'tis difficult to properly give and receive constructive criticsm; communication is nearly impossible between strangers. -Joe

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