Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 160,648 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Go On Chirping - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Dear little birds be in nest
Go on chirping for next dawn
Beauty is coming to admire
Wait and watch for rising day.

Very nice theme is developed
Life is shining near love
Mass of hopes are improving
This is definitely amazing.

Having new vision in life
You go on chirping very soon
Having new glitter in mind
Write your new attitudes.

Having love find lovely aim
Before flying you chirp more
You sing for God and rise up
New morning has arrived here.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love, morning


Comments about Go On Chirping by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/10/2016 3:30:00 AM)


    Mass of hopes! With the strong faith ahead. Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/21/2015 11:09:00 AM)


    Love for nature and all creature that live peacefully with nature is fantastically explored in your poem Sir.
    Having love find lovely aim
    Before flying you chirp more
    You sing for God and rise up
    New morning has arrived here.....10++++
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  • (11/20/2015 8:49:00 PM)


    A serene visage I can almost hear the birds themselves, even in this cold November day, it is a very lovely sound that brightens up the morning an makes for a better day. This is a wonderful poem, filled with great wording and imagery. Well Done! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 20, 2015



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