God And Mother Poem by Akhtar Jawad

God And Mother

Rating: 5.0


So in love you lost your singularity,
And became so beautiful in plurality,
So in love I lost my virginity,
You are God and me a mother!

You, like a father of uncountable children,
So many men and so many women,
Your infinite love and my finite affinity,
You are God and me a mother!

Take care of men I'm taking care of mine
I am cool like a moon, like a hot sun I cannot shine,
Your men need life and mine just maternity
You are God and me a mother!

Saturday, March 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: god,love,mother,mother and child
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Initially I wrote this poem as appended below but then I revised it as I live in a society of narrow minds, who follow words not the essence of words.

So in love you lost your singularity,
And became so beautiful in plurality,
So in love I lost my virginity,
You are God and me a mother!

You are father of uncountable children,
So many men and so many women,
Your infinite love and my finite affinity,
You are God and me a mother!

Take care of your children I'm taking care of mine
I am cool like a moon, like a hot sun I cannot shine,
Your children need life and mine just maternity
You are God and me a mother!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 14 July 2019

So in love you lost your singularity, And became so beautiful in plurality, So in love I lost my virginity, You are God and me a mother! ... Lovely monologue of a mother with God. I wonder what He would have said, had it been a dialogue.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 March 2019

A wonderful poem that captures the essence of God and mother. And expresses clearly and poetically their distinctions. Beautifully crafted and well conveyed.

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