Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 686,221 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

God, Bless Only Those - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill
Anger run high but not to force the ill
God only bless those

They enjoy the life with more indemnity,
Law protect them and offer sanctity,
Crime and fraud always they commit,
Purchase the power but word never admit,
God bless only those…….

Long live mafias who plunder and make loot,
Kill innocents and kick them with heavy boots,
People get scared with slight noise of their foot,
Murder is game for them as openly they shoot,
God bless only those…….

Generous as they are called with easy loot money,
Act noble in public and try to be funny,
They rack up Issues which are most thorny,
Adding woes and torture much to their agony,
God bless only those……

If they are soon to depart form the face of earth
There will be famine and crime’s dearth,
They may be living devils but are of real worth,
God, allow to mushroom them and often more birth,
God bless only those…….

I pray and want that they have more longitivity
Offering best Protection to such thriving community
Day will definitely come when they will forbid divinity,
we may Invite them frequently to be in near vicinity,
God bless only those…….

Let this holy place be used as den,
Earth should be heavy but not fully laden,
Nobles and good people should perish all of sudden,
If they stay for long then it will be burden,
God bless only those……

Why at all you need worshipers?
You need only those people who fill in their coffers
they will be unhappy even with gold’s offer
so why don’t you rescue them if they suffer,
God bless only those…..

I may have option not to have any faith,
Never blame fate but prefer descent death,
They will have pleasure of getting good passage,
Consider it bless and also very good message,
God bless only those…..

I need not complain to you or shed the tears
Just stick to strict faith without any fears
It may so happen that I may have pain to bear
It is your way but would love only your names to hear
God bless only those…..


Comments about God, Bless Only Those by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (11/18/2009 5:58:00 AM)

    pray to God, to shower bless,
    Not on those who commit sin less
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  • (10/13/2009 7:55:00 AM)

    I pray to God, to shower bless,
    Not on those who commit sin less
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  • (10/1/2009 11:51:00 PM)

    Generous as they are with easy loot money,
    Act noble in public and try to be funny,
    Issue they tackle which are most but thorny,
    Adding woe and torture much to their agony,
    God bless only those,
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  • (9/17/2009 9:32:00 PM)

    pray to God, to shower bless,
    Not on those who commit sin less
    But are most wanted and dreaded, ,
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  • (9/11/2009 6:14:00 AM)

    I pray to God, to shower bless,
    Not on those who commit sin less
    But are most wanted and dreaded, ................10
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  • (9/4/2009 7:31:00 AM)

    the sweetness that has been mine
    is as sweet as it was
    naughty I am me, ..can’t be the best
    but the worst i'll be........10
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  • (8/29/2009 7:17:00 PM)

    I pray to God, to shower bless,
    Not on those who commit sin less
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  • (8/24/2009 8:58:00 AM)

    Long live mafias who plunder and loot,
    Kill innocents and kick with heavy boot,
    People get scared with noise of their foot, ....10
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  • (8/24/2009 8:23:00 AM)

    I pray to God, to shower bless,
    Not on those who commit sin less .......10
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  • (8/24/2009 6:19:00 AM)

    only those whoare self seekers..10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/20/2009 1:08:00 AM)

    'I may have option not to have faith,
    Cry not for fate but prefer descent death,
    They will have pleasure and very good passage,
    Consider it bless and very good message, '...smart words from a brillian poet..
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  • (8/19/2009 10:47:00 PM)

    it is very good poem and eduative....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/15/2009 9:39:00 PM)

    poem with diffferent meaning...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/12/2009 9:11:00 PM)

    poem is in satiare form...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/12/2009 10:25:00 AM)

    very sarcastical poem...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/8/2009 9:12:00 PM)

    very very funny aspect in it....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/8/2009 9:06:00 PM)

    real good art piece....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/8/2009 8:57:00 PM)

    very nice piece of writing....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/7/2009 10:24:00 PM)

    very good oem n interesting....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/7/2009 9:49:00 AM)

    very good poemindeed...10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, February 1, 2010


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