God, Give Me Back My… Poem by Dr John Celes

God, Give Me Back My…

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God,
Give me back my joy;
Give me back my good friends;
Give me back my good old days,
When I was just a boy!

God,
Give me back my peace;
Give me back my will-pow’r;
Give me back my piety,
When I had no disease!

God,
Give me back my heart;
Give me back my faith / hope;
Give me back my love of Thee,
Which I had from the start!
Copyright by Dr John Celes 3-1-2006

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr John Celes 01 March 2006

Thanks Sandra for your excellent critiquing in a string of my recent poems.Your comments are very true, well-said and genuine too. with great regards Dr John Celes

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Dr John Celes 01 March 2006

Yes, of course Michael. But this is just a wish and the poet pines for some lost assets of life. Thank you for the comment anyway. with regards,

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Sandra Fowler 01 March 2006

The true poet must always be willing to give himself away in words. You felt this one deeply and it shows. An excellent creative effort. Kindest regards, Sandra Fowler

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Mike Finley 01 March 2006

You probably can't have all of that - but the last stanza sounds eminently do-able!

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Charles Chaim Wax 01 March 2006

in the end there can be only peace the heart always close to home and the final shelter of love a fine poem

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