Have you got the Heaven or not?
Do you know all are to fight hot
To secure a place with a doubt lot?
with my blissful bless for you
Brought you where come a very few
Do enjoy this eternal ease life new.
What! are you not happy for your mother?
Look others here not the tears of her
Faith's test is being taken with your father.
Stop; STOP I SAY STOP
I wished it. I planned it and
Did it and will do what I can
Go forward go up go assemble
God stops...
The nine years boy starts stumbling
And saunters into the Heaven.
The boy who died in the terrorist attack saw the God's Wrath
And possibly got healed of the earthly wound he got.
1. the Dec. showcase poems have already been chosen by me and will be put into the showcase this coming week, or sooner. perhaps i'll use it another month. It does have some 'English problems' in my opinion, but i may still use it because you have been a friend on PH (though not so much as you used to be!) . (: (CONT.)
Nice thought provoking poem...though birth and death are complementary to each other, the premature terrible terror caused death is really pathetic... thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
(CONT.) 2 - i do like these lines: Stop STOP I SAY STOP The nine years boy starts stumbling And saunters into the Heaven. The boy who died in the terrorist attack saw the God's Wrath And possibly got healed of the earthly wound he got. i'll assume God's Wrath was directed at the terrorists, NOT at the boy! ! ! ! Thanks for the Poet's Notes. bri (: