Love Tree Poem by Sk. Nurul Huda

Sk. Nurul Huda

Sk. Nurul Huda

Debipur, Memari, Burdwan, West Bengal, India

Love Tree

Rating: 5.0


I did not write you down in poetry
Least my readers discover you badly-
Pleading my poetic weakness;
I did not paint your face on canvas
Least my viewers devalue you-
Pleading my trembling retouch of the brush.

I wanted to make a narrow castle
Like a cocoon of a moth
And then a free fly to the Heaven.


So l plant you at the deepest Earth of my heart,
Where my lungs provide air and my blood,
As a postman, carries temperature and water.
My young-ling love sprouts to a big shade- tree
Like an umbrella over my head.

Your boughs are scattered over my full body,
My heart beats shake your hanging boughs,
And your quivering quivers my calm body
As if I play a spontaneous dance.

You are my ever green love tree
That prevents the pollution
At the very start my eyes start
To get polluted on others' sights.



R~sk nurul huda @ Songs of 26.

Wednesday, July 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 25 September 2016

Comparison of love with that of branches of tree reflects deep emotion of life. Nicely sketched with soulful ink. Thanks for sharing.

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Raj Arumugam 13 July 2016

Nurul - an eloquent poem with rich symbolism...and enjoyable read

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B.m. Biswas 14 July 2016

thank you so much for your comment to inspire me....thank you again.

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Spock The Vegan 20 August 2016

Very nice and emotional poem. thanks.

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B.m. Biswas 30 August 2016

thanks....special thanks for putting your profile picture

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Chinedu Dike 20 March 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, a beautiful creation from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 February 2019

love it- You are my ever green love tree That prevents the pollution /// great poetic expression

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Pallab Chaudhury 24 November 2018

Nicely crafted one... Ending is also very nice... Thank you. With best wishes pc

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Bri Edwards 29 December 2017

but, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , for the showcase i'll leave a note about 'lest/least'..........if i don't forget. ;) :) bri

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Bri Edwards 29 December 2017

i 'love' trees and, though i don't care much for love poems (usually) , i like this one a lot. it is very unique and a treasure on PH. to MyPoemList it goes! and i'll put it into January's showcase as well! bri :) thanks for alerting me to the poem's existence!

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Sk. Nurul Huda

Sk. Nurul Huda

Debipur, Memari, Burdwan, West Bengal, India
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