Godsend Poem by Dave Dafes

Godsend

Rating: 3.5


We meet people each day.
Some just cleave to us never going away,
Some just impress us we pray they stay
Always and forever till our hair is grey.

Tasch! You'll always be new to me.
But its like i knew you before we knew.
And my heart told me you' re one in a few.
And I'm sure it is true.

I've always thought it impossible
For feelings to travel,
To transend time or space,
Even go beyond the vast ocean of miles.
But emotions need no hands,
For it can travel to whatever lands.

You are a woman of virtue,
That i know is true.
For I've been on shores,
Awaiting your waves.
My muse, you make me feel brave.
You gave and still give me joy
Thats how i know you're GodSend

Thursday, March 3, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: devotion,friendship,god,gratitude,love,love and friendship,relationship,trust,value
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Cecile 07 March 2011

Interesting piece. The beginning seemed slightly to focused on rhyming, but the last few verses really strengthened the poem.

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Rekha Mandagere 07 March 2011

Great belief! Nice sentiments. Great! Thanks for sharing it.

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Dave Dafes

Dave Dafes

Ughelli, Delta State Nigeria
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