When it goes
Down it goes
Down in flames
And when it ends
It ends in pain.
(this was about love affairs when they end)
(But later I got to be thinking about how 'going down' took on a new meaning later in my life so a rewrite was in order.)
When I go
Down I go
Down between your legs
And when it ends
It ends in ecstasy!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well, I can honestly say that I appreciated the hinting in the first, more so than the direct. I know, there's great irony in my having made this comment! ! !