Going Down Poem by Steven SRS

Steven SRS

Oakland California

Going Down

Rating: 5.0


When it goes
Down it goes
Down in flames
And when it ends
It ends in pain.

(this was about love affairs when they end)

(But later I got to be thinking about how 'going down' took on a new meaning later in my life so a rewrite was in order.)

When I go
Down I go
Down between your legs
And when it ends
It ends in ecstasy!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kasey Graham 25 June 2010

Well, I can honestly say that I appreciated the hinting in the first, more so than the direct. I know, there's great irony in my having made this comment! ! !

0 0 Reply

Steven SRS

Oakland California
BEST POEMS
BEST POETS
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success