Going Under Poem by Min Sia

Going Under

Rating: 5.0


Leaves fell from the cloud
Rain touched the softest soil
Dwelling upon the inner core
A cold river below

The weight of the world
Beyond the sweetest downfall
Yet teardrops fall
Yet blood escapes through

Watching me, wanting me
Voices haunting me
Roots grew up above
But I'm going under

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Reshma Ramesh 13 November 2008

superb..........best thing i have read today

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