Min Sia


Death - Poem by Min Sia

I'm the truth living inside you
So don't hide, so don't cry.
I lay inside you since then.
Can you feel me in your arms?

I'm your freedom.
For no one's left to save you.
Soon darkness will spread all over.
Embracing what you've left behind.

Forget this life, come with me.
Hold my hand and don't look back.
Unlock your heart, open your gate.
I'll lay rest upon your soul.

Let the silence begin.
Allowance of life be denied.
Peace is now in access.
And play in the field of innocence.


Comments about Death by Min Sia

  • Shaffras Mahamoor (1/21/2009 12:14:00 AM)

    known reality is touced in depth..
    great
    verses vs verses...
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  • premji premjipremji premji (12/30/2008 5:54:00 AM)

    hai min,
    a beautiful face of death...
    the sublime reality...
    thanks
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  • Kelso (12/25/2008 12:10:00 AM)

    wow, this makes death seem sooo inviting...i love it! !
    good poem!
    -Kelso
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  • Naru Kaede (12/6/2008 12:37:00 PM)

    Woowowoowowoowowww...! ! !
    Cooooooolll... I know this poem meaning... hahaha, , , i can guess it...
    This is very a great poem Min Sia, you're wrong if you said that you haven't a talent,
    This is the one! You write! You're the great poem! You're the inspiration!

    hahaha, , , love it! so much!
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  • Godfrey Machuka (12/1/2008 9:28:00 PM)

    Min, you have captured death in the most friendlier way i have never thought. It surely makes any finite soul courageous to face it. I don't think i still have a reason to fear it. Thanks for great work here. Keep it up. (Report)Reply

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  • Ben Gieske (11/27/2008 8:19:00 AM)

    Very nicely written. I agree with you in many respects, but I don't necessarily things that death's invitation is so urgent. I hope you will read my poem, 'Death' and compare. (Report)Reply

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  • Ridge Cahill (11/11/2008 3:48:00 PM)

    Death need not be feared...it certainly is not when brought forth from the tip of Min Sia’s pen. Death I do not fear if I am lead through engulf in the darkness. A marvelous, marvelous poem! (Report)Reply

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  • Reshma Ramesh (11/9/2008 7:26:00 PM)

    mam' are u really twenty? ......such a beautiful and thought provoking poem.......keep it up (Report)Reply

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  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (11/8/2008 11:59:00 PM)

    Why I havent seen your poems so far? ? ! ! ! I wonder. This is pure classic....great poetry......................10 (Report)Reply

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (10/15/2008 2:03:00 AM)

    a great write..with good deliverance of the message..a nice piece.. A10

    Ency Bearis
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 15, 2008


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