Jennie Renee Sparrow

Gold Star - 5,775 Points (November 8th / Tahlequah, Oklahoma)

Pseudohallucination - Poem by Jennie Renee Sparrow

When she walks she looks at the moon
Like the cloud that follows her in the room
From the distance she's beautiful
Over time she'll make you fall
There's a smile beyond her dark eyes
She thunders in when the lightning cries
Inside a shell just below the sea
She comes in like a storm chasing her dreams
She finds herself in between
Her stitches show inside the seams
Threaded upon something you may recognize
Sewn among everything that you want to rhapsodize

Topic(s) of this poem: illusion

Comments about Pseudohallucination by Jennie Renee Sparrow

  • James Mclain Is It Poetry (10/23/2017 4:13:00 PM)

    That which is hidden meant to be seen.. iip.. James (Report) Reply

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  • Fog Runner (10/23/2017 3:58:00 PM)

    Like a late-60's psychedelic song by the Beatles, you narrate the wildly improbable as though it is 'reality' and gain admirers in the process. Happy for your success and hope you enjoyed creating. (Report) Reply

  • Lea- Beima Dorestin (10/23/2017 2:46:00 PM)

    Cool poem😊😊👏👏. (Report) Reply

  • (10/23/2017 2:27:00 PM)

    The many layers of imagination..very nice poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (10/23/2017 2:27:00 PM)

    Well done Jennie, beautiful poem, Congrats for Poem of the Day. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rini Jerry (10/23/2017 11:31:00 AM)

    Congratulations for poem of the day Jennie.. Well written (Report) Reply

  • Bill Cantrell (10/23/2017 9:54:00 AM)

    From the many fires that burn within a woman's heart, this flame is off the beaten path of the common visual, yet her dark eyes still stand out in front of any hidden smile, I really enjoyed this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Lodigiana Cotts (10/23/2017 8:08:00 AM)

    Congratulations on Poem of the day..this is indeed a very engaging poem and one that I will enjoy reading again- well done (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (10/23/2017 4:52:00 AM)

    A well deserved 'Poem of the Day', worth the honor.
    'There's a smile beyond her dark eyes
    She thunders in when the lightning cries' - wonderful!
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  • Tom Allport (10/23/2017 3:39:00 AM)

    an interesting and very creative poem full of impossibilities? .............well written J (Report) Reply

  • (10/23/2017 3:38:00 AM)

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  • Michael Hopkins (10/23/2017 2:29:00 AM)

    Congratulations on being chosen for poem of the day. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • (10/23/2017 1:07:00 AM)

    Every thing about this poem is perfect. What a great title! Captured my immediate attention. And the imagery. So vivid. And what great lines: She thunders in when the lightning cries. Amongst others. And rhapsodize is such a perfect end word. Truly worthy of Poem Of The Day! Congratulations, Jennie Renee! (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (10/23/2017 12:57:00 AM)

    Jennie, congratulations on your poem of the day.

    This poem is well constructed and executed.10

    Robert Murray Smith
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/23/2017 12:46:00 AM)

    Beautiful metaphorical and philosophical poem on illusion with haunting depiction. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (10/23/2017 12:44:00 AM)

    Such a great poem, Jennie.... a perfect 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (10/23/2017 12:43:00 AM)

    Such a great poem, Kennie (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/23/2017 12:20:00 AM)

    In between! ! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 9, 2017

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