Pseudohallucination Poem by G J Salgado

Pseudohallucination

Rating: 4.9


When she walks she looks at the moon
Like the cloud that follows her in the room
From the distance she's beautiful
Over time she'll make you fall
There's a smile beyond her dark eyes
She thunders in when the lightning cries
Inside a shell just below the sea
She comes in like a storm chasing her dreams
She finds herself in between
Her stitches show inside the seams
Threaded upon something you may recognize
Sewn among everything that you want to rhapsodize

Pseudohallucination
Monday, October 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: illusion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 23 October 2017

In between! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Jennie Renee Sparrow 02 February 2018

Thank you all for your wonderful comments and votes! It was my pleasure and honor to be featured as Poem of the Day! I enjoy creating it; one of my favorites!

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James Mclain 23 October 2017

That which is hidden meant to be seen.. iip.. James

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Jennie Sparrow 02 February 2018

All that tries to hide longs to be seen indeed. Thanks for reading James!

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Fog Runner 23 October 2017

Like a late-60's psychedelic song by the Beatles, you narrate the wildly improbable as though it is 'reality' and gain admirers in the process. Happy for your success and hope you enjoyed creating.

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Jennie Sparrow 02 February 2018

Thank you Fog! I went back in time to create this wild reality. I'm glad it took you back.

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Jennie Sparrow 02 February 2018

Thank you Fog! I went back in time to create this wild reality. Glad it took you back as well!

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Lea- Beima Dorestin 23 October 2017

Cool poem😊😊👏👏.

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Jennie Sparrow 02 February 2018

Thank you so much Let! 🙂🤓🤗

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The many layers of imagination..very nice poem..

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