Gone Poem by Jay Lukaksi

Gone

Rating: 4.0


I drown in my invisible tears
Invisible like me
I say nothing when you pass
because I know you don't feel anything.
Yet I still have hope
Hope that breaths
In and out
in and out inside me.
So I keep living
And try to stop the invisible tears
because I said I wouldn't cry,
even if your gone.

(04/10/13)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Er, poem's story? Well, I felt sad for a while because my crush started dating another girl, even though he knows I like him. I was determined not to cry over him, so u shed invisible tears. This is what came out when I collected myself.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 11 April 2013

A very strong poem about love. I hope you get over him if he doesn't come back to you. Nice poem though. Keep writing.

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Ja Lukaksi 11 April 2013

Yes, exactly. I'm just a tad young to express my emotions as well as you just did. Tsk, I can never think of the words quick enough, and then someone else finds them. Oh well. I'll improve!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 April 2013

A feeling bathed in broken hope with the hope inter woven...

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