Good Morning, Charles Poem by M.J. Lemon

Good Morning, Charles

Rating: 4.6


Transgender women
leggy blondes smoking cigars
Thursday at the bar
the rum shot caught in her throat
won't prevent the dry heaving

Thursday, January 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life,charles bukowski
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Someone once asked me what I thought Charles Bukowski would run into first thing in the morning, or just before entering heaven. I come up this, this purely fictional response.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 27 January 2019

Hahahahahaha you are a humorous person... guess what, i think the guy who asking you this question impressed with this response. its fictional but well, thats how a good writer can make a good novel!

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Mj Lemon 27 January 2019

I hope so, Soul. You made my day. Thanks for reading.

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Kevin Patrick 28 January 2019

ooooooohh snap! Captures Bukowski to a T, though we all know he preferred something stronger. This might be fiction, or it could have been him one Saturday night! . fantastic as always!

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Mj Lemon 09 August 2020

Thank you, Asim! I hope Charles would find the positive in my effort! Thanks again.

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M Asim Nehal 06 August 2020

Ha ha ha very well thought putting yourselves in Charles shoe, this is something which I am sure Charles would have admired too, had he being alive today.10++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 August 2019

I ALSO WANT A WOW NOT A VOW FROM YOU AS YOU GVE TO THE POETESS BELOW URRRRRRR WOWABLE LEMON STAY FIRST YOUNG POET ABOVE ME MY WORLD ENDS BUT GRADUALLY NUMBER ONE FOE LONG TIME YU WILL BE LOVELY POETRY ADORABLE MUST SHE BE

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Mj Lemon 28 August 2019

Now...A WOW indeed! Thank you, Poet.

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Susan Williams 22 March 2019

your writing talent and skills are astounding and magical and unique and powerful! ! ! ! 10 and onto my favorite list

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Mj Lemon 23 March 2019

Wow! Thank you, Susan. I am blown away. Thank you so much

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Susan Williams 22 March 2019

your writing talent and skills are astounding and magical and unique and powerful! ! ! ! 10

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