ivor or ivor.e hogg

Rookie (7/4/1934 / Hebburn.Co Durham U.K)

Good News To Share - Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

Now what’s amiss?
No welcome kiss
That’s not like you

you will give me
a kiss or two,

Your smiling face
tears now replace
What is to do?

Why are you sad
or are you mad.
Now tell me true.

Did I offend?
I will amend
I promise you.

I am not mad
but I am sad
I cannot do.

All I would will
I feel too ill.
I really do.

Once out of bed
I vomited.
What should I do

What did we want?
You are pregnant
I’m sure it’s true.

We soon will be
not two but three.
I’m proud of you.

We will be three
a family
I’ll care for you.

So frown no more
smile as before.
Come kiss me do.

All will be well.
Who first to tell
I leave to you.


Rhupunt welsh bardic form

Comments about Good News To Share by ivor or ivor.e hogg

  • (6/28/2007 3:04:00 PM)

    This left me feeling like a pile of melted mush-in a good way. (Report) Reply

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  • Ernestine Northover (6/8/2007 12:53:00 PM)

    Brilliant write. Great use of words and rhyme. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this one, a super poem. Well done indeed. A 10 definitely!
    Love Ernestine XXX
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  • (6/8/2007 9:27:00 AM)

    three lines
    they work well
    for you.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 8, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 9, 2011

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