Good Only From Far Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Good Only From Far

Rating: 5.0


Hills hail you from afar,
Looked from far a far star,
Harlots far heavily over-done,
Battle tales, safe from home sounding fun,
All feel good if far are.
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Words well said | 19.11.14 |

Thursday, July 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: far,star
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In a standard limerick, third and forth lines are a foot shorter. Here the norm is reversed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unica Hija 09 April 2020

Some good things are better appreciated in a distance. Yes, like a far star that makes our hearts skip a bit by the radiance it emits that fills our hearts no matter how far. Full marks!

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 April 2020

Only when one starts nit picking does one find faults in a thing. Everything is a thing of beauty when seen from far, Good, the acuity of vision has its limits. Thanks for liking this piece.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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