Goodbye Poem by Alesia Leach
Goodbye
I lay in bed on this quiet night
and know I will leave before it is light
I kiss you goodbye
and pray you do not hear me cry
Our dreams lay broken
our grief unspoken
hearts cut open
and emotionally frozen
Our hopes in tomorrow
are now filled with sorrow
and have flown with the sparrow
like time that was borrowed.
Such a sad but beautifully written piece! Well done, my friend!
Very poignant write with intense emotion. Our dreams lay broken our grief unspoken.............. a nice rhythmic write too.
Our hopes in tomorrow are now filled with sorrow.....Really we are in sorrow now. We have to avoid it by doing spiritual deeds. Very deep imagination, nicely composed. Many thanks.
A sad jaunty poem in awesome lyrical rhythmic flow. The word choice is very poetic. Pls do coment my latest poem too.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Our dreams lay broken our grief unspoken hearts cut open and emotionally frozen A poem of deep melancholy! Very moving!