Tiffany ThePirate

Goodbye 2 - Poem by Tiffany ThePirate

I figured it out
I know what i've done
I said i hated you
and now its me whose shunned

Please understand
I don't, at all
When i said that
my mind was awall

I've said sorry
and im trying here
i love you guys
I need you here

I can't blame you
only me
I let my depression
get the best of me

I hurt your feeling
I understand
Maybe in time
We can make amends


Comments about Goodbye 2 by Tiffany ThePirate

  • (12/6/2009 11:50:00 PM)

    wow another touching written piece...lovely! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/6/2009 5:30:00 PM)

    The great thing I have learned about true friendship is that one will except the others short combings and move on. A friend told me once 'Feel what the f*ck you have to feel and then lets be friends again.' I learned a lot from that one sentence. Keep writing about what you feel and let others work out their own feelings. (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2009 5:53:00 AM)

    Well expressed again....10s (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 9:13:00 AM)

    tiffany things happen and if it gets the better of you not your fault stay
    and write 10
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  • John Knight (12/5/2009 8:53:00 AM)

    Hi Tiffany - Don't worry Angel we all forgive you because we all love you. Always nice to say sorry for that i give you a TEN. Keep writing and keep reading all of our Poems. Often we guys say really really lovely things about the PH Ladies - you are all awesome. Love you in poetry - JOHN (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 8:37:00 AM)

    very well written again..sounds like a closing to the first goodbye...a final request....loved it thanks again.. ~^..^ (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 8:26:00 AM)

    nope stop don't dropp you will get up now look into my poetry I deleted them too

    now stand back Ice i glisten has a brand new bag of vision

    call me your optimist optometrist- with a dash of a pen you might heal yourself again
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2009

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