Grant Me A Smile Comments

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing.

Great poem with passion, keep writing. A smile is worth granting.

Hi Hyuan...this poem is so very delicate...wonderful...you write wonder poetry...And I disagree with Jamie's comment about 'forced rhyming'...your piece flowed smoothly...very nicely done... Lare Austin

Some great lines in this one. ('a short moment is enough to love you'....great one) , but I found there was some forced rhyming; it threw off the rhythm a bit.