Sunday, December 27, 2015

Grateful For Two Valuable Things Comments

Rating: 5.0

I created a life that only exist within my mind.
Sometimes I wonder why is it so hard to find.
'You're young, you still have time' a quote that's true but hopeless at times.
I work and pay bills like all adults do, so why is it hard to find the life I created within my mind?
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Brittany Brown
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 January 2016

I ask myself at times because I haven't accomplished one thing I had in mind. Maybe that's it, I spend all my time planning for what I want not for I what I have and how to see the beauty in it. Satisfaction in little things. counting the blessings every dawn and at dusk , this bring satisfacion in our lives. thank you for your meditations about yourself and your life. this poem opens the eyes of the reader. thank you again. tony

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Kim Barney 08 January 2016

I have a loving husband and a healthy beautiful daughter. With just those two things, I shall look no farther. Many people would be jealous of what you have. You are blessed. Take care of your husband and your daughter and keep writing. May God bless you and your family.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 27 December 2015

True, with a family of your own, there's no need to look farther from the sun. There is so much to tend in your own garden. Rated 10+++

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